“I want to ensure that we have nutritious food to eat now and in the future. Studying in California and at UC Davis, I am able to work at the forefront of technology, science and service to the community.”
The Statement of Purpose is a short essay that you will customize for each program to which you apply. This essay will be evaluated by the graduate program faculty, so present yourself as someone who will be a good fit for the program.
Writing a strong Statement of Purpose
Your statement of purpose is an important part of your UC graduate school application. Be sure to write a polished essay so you will make a good first impression. Each application is different, but a good Statement of Purpose should contain the following elements:
Introduction: Indicate the topic you want to study and the degree you want to earn. Describe your research and how graduate school will help you reach your career goals, as well as the contributions you will make to the program.
Accomplishments: Summarize your achievements, including research projects, classes or work that stimulated your desire for graduate studies during your undergraduate or master’s career.
Referrals: If you have received encouragement from professors in your chosen program, mention them by name, if appropriate.
Format: Modify your statement of purpose for each application you submit, carefully following the guidelines and instructions, which may vary from program to program. The statement should be one to two pages long, single-spaced, using a 12-point font that is easy to read; but make sure to confirm each institution’s specific formatting requirements. Proofread your essay carefully to make sure it is free of typos or grammatical errors.
A few helpful writing tips
The following tips can help you create a strong statement that reflects your readiness to embark on your graduate education.
Address your audience: Your primary audience is the faculty in the program to which you are applying. Treat your statement of purpose as an application in that department or scholarly field. Be compelling and clear.
Provide specific examples: Rather than stating that you are a high achiever, for example, describe a project wherein you exceeded a professor’s expectations. If your grades suffered because of a misfortune, such as an illness, explain how you persevered. You can describe a mistake that taught you a valuable lesson — but do not make excuses. Be positive and concise.
